by Rogenna Brewer
Both Harm and Nash first appeared in earlier Superromance titles. I didn't give much thought to naming them at the time. Now here I am stuck with some awkward monikers.
Poor Harm. He first appeared in SEAL It With A Kiss as the brunt of a joke with a toilet seat super glued to his posterior. But as the new XO he had some wise words for the hero and became worthy of his own story, scarred buttocks and all.
That wasn't even the worst thing I did to him. I named our soon to be hero Harmon Kyle. No, not Kyle Harmon. I gave him a last name for a first name and a first name for a last name. Please don't follow this example.
I had a good reason at the time. You see I'm a JAG fan from way back. So Mr. David James Elliott aka Lieutenant Commander Harmon "Harm" Rabb meet Lieutenant Commander Harmon Kyle. Affectionately known as Harm.
In case you're wondering Harmon means "warrior."
As for Kenneth Nash, he received a mere mention in The SEAL's Baby. His sub-plot threatened to take over the main plot and was cut. Here's a hint from that story.
Mike scrubbed a weary hand over his face. "We lost two good men last time out. Then came home and--" he shook his head because he still couldn't quite believe it. "--now Nash is accused of killing his pregnant wife in some posttraumatic-stress-disorder episode."
Interestingly, Nash is or was also an XO and I had the synopsis for his story long before I wrote The SEAL's Baby. I just couldn't find the right heroine at the time. But as I fleshed out this hero for a very intricate plot the name no longer fit his ethnicity. In order to make the plot work and the name work I had to give him a Syrian mother and an American Marine father.
I don't know Jake Gyllenhaul's ethnicity (actually, I do and it's a mix), but does it really matter? He was in the Prince of Persia and he looks hot as a Jarhead. So why wouldn't he look good as a Navy SEAL? Kenneth means "handsome."
The point is to be careful naming those secondary and throwaway characters. One never knows when they might be called into service as the hero or heroine of their own story.
Readers have you ever wondered about a character's name? Authors how do you choose your character names?
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In a world where unusual names coupled with uncommon spelling is the norm, I've made a conscience effort to buck the trend and give my characters common names.
As a reader I don't like stumbling over pronunciation, even in my head. How about you?
My process for naming characters can be quite elaborate. Generally, the name and the meaning have to fit before I consider christening him or her. Please don't get me started on nicknames.
However, I have a bad habit of naming secondary characters on the fly which is about to come back and bite me. I've just signed a two book deal with Harlequin Superromance for A Stranger in the Family and a book to be named later. I can tell you the working title for the book to be named is Harm's Way.
Both Harm and Nash first appeared in earlier Superromance titles. I didn't give much thought to naming them at the time. Now here I am stuck with some awkward monikers. Poor Harm. He first appeared in SEAL It With A Kiss as the brunt of a joke with a toilet seat super glued to his posterior. But as the new XO he had some wise words for the hero and became worthy of his own story, scarred buttocks and all.
That wasn't even the worst thing I did to him. I named our soon to be hero Harmon Kyle. No, not Kyle Harmon. I gave him a last name for a first name and a first name for a last name. Please don't follow this example.
I had a good reason at the time. You see I'm a JAG fan from way back. So Mr. David James Elliott aka Lieutenant Commander Harmon "Harm" Rabb meet Lieutenant Commander Harmon Kyle. Affectionately known as Harm.
In case you're wondering Harmon means "warrior."
As for Kenneth Nash, he received a mere mention in The SEAL's Baby. His sub-plot threatened to take over the main plot and was cut. Here's a hint from that story.
Mike scrubbed a weary hand over his face. "We lost two good men last time out. Then came home and--" he shook his head because he still couldn't quite believe it. "--now Nash is accused of killing his pregnant wife in some posttraumatic-stress-disorder episode."
Interestingly, Nash is or was also an XO and I had the synopsis for his story long before I wrote The SEAL's Baby. I just couldn't find the right heroine at the time. But as I fleshed out this hero for a very intricate plot the name no longer fit his ethnicity. In order to make the plot work and the name work I had to give him a Syrian mother and an American Marine father.I don't know Jake Gyllenhaul's ethnicity (actually, I do and it's a mix), but does it really matter? He was in the Prince of Persia and he looks hot as a Jarhead. So why wouldn't he look good as a Navy SEAL? Kenneth means "handsome."
The point is to be careful naming those secondary and throwaway characters. One never knows when they might be called into service as the hero or heroine of their own story.
Readers have you ever wondered about a character's name? Authors how do you choose your character names?
Please don't forget to enter our super six pack contest. And while you're at it check out my monthly drawing at rogennabrewer.com.

14 comments:
Since I don't read aloud I don't really stumble over pronouncing names. I just read them by sight alone. I don't like it if names are similar though.
That's something editors are very conscience of as well, Mary. No characters with the same initials even, if it can be avoided.
Of course I blew that big time and gave two characters the same name as part of the plot in The Marine's Baby. Plus threw in a Senior. And added a son to the mix.
As for the pronunciation of names, sad to say I'm a mumbler. I roll things around in my head and my lips move.
I can still hear my grandmother asking, "What are you saying when you're talking to yourself."
And me responding, "I talk to myself?"
In the Navy I had a roommate who said I talked in my sleep. Must be all those characters keeping my brain and mouth connected.
Good morning, All. You know the drill. I'll be popping in and out all day to chat and answer any questions.
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I've had this happen, too, Ro. I created an interesting "citizen" of my imaginary town and my first description put him as "Bigfoot's younger brother." Wouldn't you know he eventually worked his way up to hero...with the name Rufus (borrowed from my sister's dog). LOL. Naturally, we come to find out it isn't his real name.
Fun post. Thanks for posting the link on FB.
Deb
Congratulations on the coming books, Rogenna! :-)
When I wrote historicals, I got name ideas from the censuses of the place/time I was writing in. Modern names are trickier, though...there is a lot of thought that goes into choosing them!
Deb, at least you got to explain Rufus away as a nickname
Cathryn, that's a good trick to know for historicals.I
I do something similar for contemporary. Though the unusual names have been taking over the lists.
Congratulations on the book!
I guess we just don't want any secondary characters to have names we wouldn't want for main characters.
Congrts on the new release book, Rogena :)
thank you, Laura and Eli.
Chey, so true.
Hi Rogenna ~ My great nephews and great nieces have a mix of names.
First family ~ girl Bryn, boys Luc and Jac. Next family 3 girls Jenelle, Amy , and Serra (pronounced Sarah). Next family 3 boys, Kayel, Louik and Adeo. Next family one son Kolton. Next family girl Haily, boy Colton. Next family girl Victoria, boy Alexander. As you can see a real mix.
I'm looking forward to your new books.
I don't wonder too much about names. It's the people they are that matter to me. True, I don't really like it if the heroine has a typical "guy" name. But then it might fit her as she's a tomboy... So what's in a name ;)
Names don't bother me. My family uses nicknames (a lot!!!). If names are hard to pronounce it doesn't bother me because Im reading them to myself. Does seem like you're stuck with some duplicates in your next two books though :). Will hve to et them as I love your navy seal books!
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