Saturday, April 30, 2011

WEEKENDER APRIL 28 -29



This week's daily drawing winners...




Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Cathy P

You have won Just For The Night by Tawny Weber and The Prodigal Son by Beth Andrews




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Monday, May 2, 2011


Mary Sullivan




Tuesday, May 3 , 2011


Wanda Ottewell, Senior Editor Superromance




Wednesday, May 4, 2011


Debra Salonen and Linda Warren



DO-OVERS


It's deja vu...all over again when two veteran Superromance authors discuss the re-release of two of their favorite books


To celebrate this stroll down memory lane, both authors are giving away one copy of their new Showcase duo and one copy of the winner's choice from their current releases.



Thursday, May 5, 2011


Rogenna Brewer



“GOING TO THE EXTREME - COUPONING”




Friday, April 29, 2011

Writing Tip of the Week

When I'm struggling to engage with my writing for the day, 
I imagine my way into the work. Lie down somewhere 
comfortable and quiet and think about the scene 
you want to write. Picture it like a movie in your head, 
listen to the dialogue,imagine the way your 
characters might move and what they might say 
to each to each other. When you feel 
as though you have a clear picture in your head, 
hit the computer and dig into the scene.  
~Sarah Mayberry


The winner of this week's 5-page Super Critique is Christy Olesen.
PLEASE USE OUR CONTACT PAGE TO CLAIM YOUR PRIZE.

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Thursday, April 28, 2011

Something To Blog About

After coming up with a semi-brilliant title and leaving it in the queue all week I've since discovered that blogs, much like manuscripts, DO NOT write themselves.  No matter how much money you leave under your pillow for the book & blog faeries it simply doesn't work that way.  Even the blood, sweat and tears left on the pillow don't count for much.

So here I am the night before my post, staring down a blank page, with nothing to blog about.

I still have that original topic to fall back on, but maybe the future of prosthetics isn't as interesting as the amputee heroes who continue to serve their country.

In my May release, Mitzi's Marine, Gunnery Sergeant Bruce Calhoun is such a hero.

"People commonly think of Heroes as strong or brave, but these qualities are secondary to sacrifice--the true mark of a Hero.  Sacrifice is the Hero's willingness to give up something of value, perhaps even [his] own life, on behalf of an ideal or a group."  ~ Christopher Vogler, The Writer's Journey.

Wounded warrior arch types are a weakness of mine (see Beth's post of yesterday ;).  And since I'm also a headline junkie it's easy to understand why such a premise would capture my attention.  But when the idea for Mitzi's Marine first came to me I set it aside to write The Marine's Baby.

I knew Bruce's story would be difficult write.

Mitzi's Marine is my first release in three years and two months (yeah!).  No, I didn't spend all that time writing it, or fighting it as the case may be <g>.  I worked on other projects.  And somehow I wound up with this new release and a deadline for my next book (another, yeah!) in the same month.

Which means I haven't had as much time for the promotion of Mitzi's Marine as I'd like.  Or to write the really FUN blog on Extreme Couponing I was planning as a back up to my too serious Merging Man and Machine blog that I let sit without progress in the queue all week.

I did, however, get as far as googling couponing.  Which reminded me that eharlequin has coupons for books.   Just the thing I needed to tie couponing and reading together, right?

So I clicked over to find...IT'S RAINING MEN!  SAVE $5.

It's Raining Men

You can't imagine my excitement when I saw Mitzi's Marine was part of this weekly promotion <g>.   Please forgive my self indulgence.  I promise I'll get around to writing both those blogs after deadline (maybe before, I think I have at least one blog date early next month :)

Meanwhile, please enjoy the excerpt of Mitzi's Marine below.  I'm giving away The Marine's Baby and Mitzi's Marine duo to two posters.

We can talk about it raining hot military men, hoorah!

Or (since I'm being self indulgent, here) what have you done recently to indulge yourself?

On the way into work this morning I thought of something funny to talk about.  These are The Guy Rules.  It's an old list, viral on the internet so I don't really know who to credit them to, but here they are, tell me what you think--Can you hear your man in any of them?

All #1 on purpose<g>.

THE GUY RULES

1. Learn to work the toilet seat.  You'er a big girl.  If it's up, put it down.
1. Sometimes, we are not thinking about you. Live with it.
1. Shopping is NOT a sport, and no, we are never going to think of it that way.
1. When we have to go somewhere, absolutely anything you wear is fine. Really.
1. Crying is blackmail.
1. Ask for what you want. Let us be clear on this one:
Subtle hints do not work
Strong hints do not work
Obvious hints do not work
Just say it!
1. We don't remember dates. Mark birthdays and anniversaries on a calendar. Remind us frequently beforehand.
1. Yes and No are perfectly acceptable answers to almost every question.
1. Come to us with a problem only if you want help solving it. That's what we do. Sympathy is what your girlfriends are for.
1. A headache that lasts for 17 months is a problem. See a doctor.
1. Check your oil! Please.
1. Anything we said 6 months ago is inadmissible in an argument. In fact, all comments become null and void after 7 days.
1. If you won't dress like the Victoria's Secret girls, don't expect us to act like soap opera guys.
1. If something we said can be interpreted two ways, and one of the ways makes you sad or angry, we meant the other one.
1. Let us ogle. We are going to look anyway; it's genetic.
1. You can either ask us to do something or tell us how you want it done, not both. If you already know best how to do it, just do it yourself.
1. The relationship is never going to be like it was the first two months we were going out. Get over it.
1. ALL men see in only 16 colours, like Windows default settings. Peach, for example, is a fruit, not a colour. Pumpkin is also a fruit. We have no idea what mauve is.
1. If it itches, it will be scratched. We do that.
1. We are not mind readers and we never will be. Our lack of mind-reading ability is not proof of how little we care about you.
1. If we ask what is wrong and you say "nothing," We will act like nothing's wrong. We know you are lying, but it is just not worth the hassle.
1. I'm in shape. -ROUND is a shape.


PhotobucketMITZI'S MARINE
Harlequin Superromance
May 2011


This battle has only just begun!

It's bad enough that Gunnery Sergeant Bruce Calhoun, USMC, lost his best friend, Freddie, in Iraq. But getting stuck in his hometown recruiting office with Chief Petty Officer Mitzi Zahn? This is torture! Mitzi, his ex-fiancĂ©eand Freddie’s little sister—hasn’t forgiven him for anything. She's making that fact abundantly clear.

How can Bruce apologize? He's a Marine. He still loves her, but he can’t have her. Not when he is hell-bent on recovering from his injury and rejoining the fight overseas. Not even if Mitzi’s love proves to be the most powerful force of all….  Read Excerpt

Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Fave Five

by Beth

Today I'd like to introduce my fabulous critique partner (and the best friend I could ever ask for *g*) Blaze author, Tawny Weber! Tawny and I have been critique partners for many years now and have gone through the highs and lows of this business together. She's always there for me and best of all, listens to my whining when I've hit the middle-of-the-book blues :-)

Here's the back cover blurb from Tawny's latest, JUST FOR THE NIGHT

Things to Do in Blackout…

Power outages happen, and you have to be prepared. After all, you could be trapped somewhere—like in an empty store—with your ex.

Who is still irresistible. And hot.

And who knows how to make the most out of a dark situation….

Checklist for: Larissa Zahn

Food
Water
First aid kit (With condoms. Be prepared. Very, very prepared.)
Someone you’re still overwhelmingly into (Jason Cantrell, I’m looking at you.)
Plenty of time in the dark (Read: hot nookie. Lots of it.)


The ability to walk away without regrets in the morning…. (Uh oh!)

24 Hours: Blackout No lights. No power. And no holding back…

Sounds great, huh? To find out more, check out Tawny's website.

Since Tawny and I both have May releases, we thought it would be fun to do a joint blog today. Here's our Fave Five:

Fave Author:

Tawny - Nora Roberts

Beth - Nora Roberts

Fave type of hero:

Tawny - The Bad Boy

Beth - The Lost Soul

Fave hook:

Tawny - Makeover/Cinderella

Beth - Friends to lovers

Fave book of each others:

Tawny - A Not So Perfect Past. I loved Dylan from the first time he showed up in Not Without Her Family and still adore him to this day. What a fabulous hero!!!

Beth - Going Down Hard. I love Tawny's sexy cowboy Reece and the conflict between him and Sierra, the heroine. Those two generated some mighty hot sparks!

Fave thing about our current release:

Tawny - I love Larissa’s need to control things and Jason’s refusal to be controlled. Between her deep-seated desire for romance and his fear of it, this was a really fun story to write. Those differences really came into conflict when the two of them were trapped together in the blackout.
Beth - I loved revisiting the Sheppard family and getting to write the Sheppard brothers again but mostly, I just loved Matt *g* He's a charmer and hides his true feelings behind an easy grin and it was great fun to see the heroine fall for him despite her best efforts not to :-)

Now we'd like to turn it over to you and find out your Fave Five.

Who is your fave author?

Fave type of hero?

Fave romance hook?

Fave Blaze or Superromance?

Fave thing about the last book you read?

One commenter will win signed copies of both JUST FOR THE NIGHT and THE PRODIGAL SON!

Tuesday, April 26, 2011

BEST OF BLOG - Forgetting, Confronting and Choices


Best of Blog:  Not surprising Wanda's 2nd blog comes in 2nd as a fan favorite.  Prize information and discussion questions have been removed from the last paragraph so as not to be misleading.  Please enjoy this recap.  We will be back on Wednesday April 27th with new content.



By Wanda Ottewell, Senior Editor Harlequin Superromance

I am frequently asked what I like—and don’t like—to see in manuscripts. It occurred to me this would be the perfect place to have this discussion! As I was writing this blog it became clear that the topic is big—apparently I’ve developed quite a list of preferences. So I thought today I’d cover some of those qualities I love to see then chat about the pet peeves at a later date.

The number one thing I love is when a manuscript makes me forget I’m an editor. I’ve been doing this job long enough that I have a strong editorial voice in my head. As I read I’m paying attention to flow, to gaps in information, to leaps in plotting, to character development, etc. So when a story is so captivating, the characters so engaging, the plotting so compelling that the editorial voice is silenced…wow. I’m sold! Of course, there is a bit of frustration that accompanies these manuscripts because I often have to go back through to see if I did miss something. Small price to pay I think.

Another thing I really love is when the unexpected happens. I enjoy having the story lead me to expect XYZ to happen, only to have ABC unfold. When an author takes a popular theme, such as a reunion romance or a secret baby, and puts a unique spin on it, the results can be wonderful and fresh.

Speaking of the unexpected, I often challenge authors to let their characters confront rather than avoid, whether that means avoiding a conversation or withholding information. Too many times I’ve read manuscripts where there’s no compelling reason for the characters not to talk or share. Then the plots can become riddled with timely interruptions and other contrivances designed only to prevent a conversation from occurring. What can often happen is that when a character does confront or reveal a secret an even bigger problem results and the tension escalates. And that becomes good storytelling!

That leads nicely into the next quality I like in a manuscript: when the characters are the instruments of their own resolutions. I like to see heroes and heroines work through their own issues and come to their own conclusions about their situations and what they should do next. I like to observe them putting together the various puzzle pieces they’ve received, see them measure those pieces against their desires then decide what’s next. Sure, they can talk to a trusted friend, but their plan/goal/next step should come from within. If a secondary character drops key information in their laps or tells them the secret that explains all, well, it kinda feels like cheating.

While I could go on, there is one more quality I’ll mention here. I really like to see characters making choices, particularly when they have to choose between two things that hold value for them. Seems to me that’s when true compromise happens. I think as readers of romance stories we want characters to work for, and therefore be worthy of, true love. If their resolution is easy, if there is no compromise, it doesn’t feel quite so satisfying.

Monday, April 25, 2011

BEST OF BLOG - What is a Superromance?

Best of Blog:  Wanda's first blog remains a fan favorite.  Prize information and discussion questions have been removed from the last paragraph so as not to be misleading.  Please enjoy this recap.  We will be back on Wednesday April 27th with new content.

by Wanda Ottewell,  
Senior Editor Harlequin Superromance
This is going to be a great blog! No, I don’t mean this entry I’m composing (we won’t discuss its greatness or lack thereof). I mean this collective authors’ blog. It’s awesome to see authors and readers—and the occasional editor—hang out to discuss stories, books and a little about life, too. How fun is it to share our love of good books? Today I’m focusing on the stories and books part of the discussion. Specifically what makes a manuscript suitable for Harlequin Superromance.
The key to this series is the realistic quality. We’re looking for stories about characters who could be us...or our best friends or our neighbors. We want situations and conflicts that could actually happen in our lives. When a reader steps into the world of a Harlequin Superromance book, she should think the characters are familiar in that they react, feel and think in ways that people she knows react, feel and think. And the reader should think that the circumstances the characters face are believable. Maybe she even knows people who have gone through similar experiences.
I have to interrupt myself here for a brief tangent. While we want believable, realistic stories, we must always keep in mind that we want to engage our readers. That means conflict, emotional high stakes and dramatic situations. We don’t need to follow the characters through the minutiae of their daily routines. Yeah, we all shower and get ready to face the world—some of us spend more time at this than others!—but generally this isn’t the most dramatic or life-altering part of our day. So if there is a scene in a manuscript set around laundry, that pile of dirty clothes needs to significantly alter the characters’ lives. Okay, tangent over.
It almost goes without saying (yet I’m going to say it anyway) that the romantic relationship between the hero and heroine needs to be the core of the story. We want to see them get their happy ever after...but we want them to have to work for it. We want them to have to grow individually so that they deserve each other, so that they want to be the version of themselves they see in the eyes of their beloved. We want them to have to make some tough choices, some compromises so that they know—and the reader knows—that this person is their true love. All that growth and those choices means there has to be conflict: inner conflict for each character, external conflict that puts obstacles in their path and romantic conflict (those forces at work to keep them apart).
Another defining factor of Harlequin Superromance is the length. Beginning in February 2011, the books will be longer (yet the price remains the same)! We’re looking for manuscripts between 70,000 – 75,000 words. This added length gives authors the opportunity to go deeper into their characters and conflict or add a closely linked subplot.

Sunday, April 24, 2011






This week's daily drawing winners...




Monday, April 18 , 2011
CrystalGB
Apologies - the prize for Crystal GB is a $15 Starbucks voucher and a Kindle Superromance book of readers choice, courtesy of Jeannie Watt. (I blame too much chocolate for the confusion!)



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Monday, April 25, 2011

Best of Blog


Tuesday, April 19 , 2011

Best of Blog


Wednesday, April 20, 2011



Beth Andrews


Thursday, April 21, 2011

TBA

Friday, April 22, 2011

Writing Tip of the Week

"I've found I that when I tried to 'find the time' to write, I had no extra time. Now I make the time."
~ Beth Andrews



The winner of this week's 5-page Super Critique is Jessica Lemmon.
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Thursday, April 21, 2011

Spring Break 2011

Due to a rash of spring fever and deadlines we're taking a break until Wednesday, April 27th.  Meanwhile check out our new Super Popular Post feature in the sidebar and catch up on some of the more popular posts you may have missed.


"A little Madness in the Spring
Is wholesome even for the King."
- Emily Dickinson

Speaking of which...

If you haven't seen The T-Mobile Royal Wedding spoof it's worth watching--6 million hits and counting.  But IMHO it can't hold a candle to the original with 64 million hits.  Check out JK Wedding Entrance Dance.








Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Does This Ever Happen To You?--Lenora Worth

Last week was one of those whirlwind times where I had so many things going on, I couldn't keep up. I'm sure you've had that type of week, too. We were remodeling our kitchen, I had AAs for one book and revisions on yet another (my second Super!!!)and I'd planned a party to celebrate my 55th birthday and the release of my 45th book. A big week full of comings and goings and noises from my tired husband that I can't repeat here.

But on Saturday afternoon, I took a few minutes to walk around my garden. I just needed a few quiet moments before all my guests arrived. A friend gave me a beautiful yellow iron butterfly--one of those garden sculpture type things that you stake in the ground--and I'd place it behind the pool in the palm tree garden. The wind always twists the butterfly around so you can't see it from the house so I fixed it. The iron butterfly's wingspan is about a foot or so. But there on the ground in the leaves left over from winter, a real golden-brown butterfly landed.

I was so amazed, I couldn't move. He sat there and opened his wings (about a two inch span) and this beautiful real butterfly looked almost exactly like my iron one.
I watched him, not daring to move, as he opened his wings and closed them as if he wanted to put on a show just for me. I'm a spiritual person, so I saw this as a sign from above. Birthdays were always a big deal with one of my three sisters. But she died in a car accident involving a drunk driver in 1991. I sold my first book in 1992 and then in 1993, on my birthday, I sold two more. I always told people that my sister had pulled some strings up there for me. So I stared at that beautiful butterfly and thought of all the loved ones who'd gone on ahead of me--my sister, a brother, my parents, my husband's parents, dear friends here and there, and I wondered if that butterfly was a gift from heaven. I didn't want to move from my spot but I also wanted a picture. I rushed inside the house and found my i-phone then hurried back. The butterfly was still there. But here's the kicker. The minute I held the camera to take the picture, he disappeared. And I did not see him fly away. I searched everywhere, but he was gone. Why did I think I needed to put such an intimate moment on Facebook, anyway? Next time, I'll forget the camera and just sit on the diving board and enjoy the butterfly.

Do you ever have such moments where the universe is at peace for just a few precious moments? I'll never forget this butterfly and how he held me in fascination for a few minutes after a busy, joyful week. I hope you find your own butterfly this week.

Tuesday, April 19, 2011

The Hunt is on for a ... RITA Dress by Helen Brenna

First off, I hate shopping. I can tolerate the process if I'm rested, well fed and possibly softened up a bit with a glass or two of wine, but in truth the idea of going to mall for the sake of going to a mall makes my skin crawl. Even so, I decided to face my demons and go on a reconnaissance mission for dresses for the RWA RITA and Golden Heart award night this summer in NYC.

I know it seems a little early for this, but the conference is a whole month earlier this year and I happen to be obsessing a bit about what I'm going to wear that night. Plus, I'm between books right now - or am I a glutton for punishment? - and I thought it might be a good idea just to see what was out there.

That was mistake number one. Deciding to try on a few dresses was mistake number two.

Twenty dresses in various styles and colors later, I had absolutely no success. That is, unless you can call knowing what you'll never be caught dead in a success. My fresh-from-a-long-and-cold-Minnesota-winter skin wasn't a wonderful backdrop for any style or color.

Exhausted and defeated, I headed home. On my way, I remembered having a similar experience last year. After three long and arduous outings, I ended up debating between two dresses by the same designer. So I decided to see if I could save myself a big headache and check on-line to see if my second choice was still for sale anywhere. I'm in luck! It is!




So this is the dress I'm thinking of. What do you think ... navy blue or black?

#1












I also ran across these pretty possibilities.


Not sure my tan lines would work with this neckline, but I might just have to try this one on.

#2













Might be a nice alternative to black?

#3











Love the tiered layers on this one.

#4






Can you tell I like black?

#5














And here are a few that I WISH worked.




This one's way out of my price range.









That pasty Minnesota skin? Oddly enough, I still have tan-lines from last summer, so I'm not sure this neckline on the right would work.









Wish to heck I could wear yellow. Sigh.









They don't have this one in my size. Darn it. Would love to try it on.











Ooooh, shiny!








Another one way out of my price range. Pretty though, huh?





Okay, so what do you think? Should I go for #1, 2, 3, 4, or 5? Or should I throw caution to the wind and run with one of the last six?

And if you're going to the RWA conference this summer, do you already have a dress picked out for the awards ceremony or are you one of those crazy people who wait until the last minute?

Helen

Monday, April 18, 2011

Doing It Deep by Jeannie Watt



I would like to thank Mary Sullivan for prompting this blog topic, since she asked the question in her Thursday blog, "Where is the most unusual place you’ve ever read a book?" My answer is more than a mile underground.

I went to work in a lead-zinc mine right out of college. It was the deepest underground mine in the United States, the lowest level being 8,100 feet beneath the top of the mountain. This was not a time when there were a lot of women in the mining industry. There were over 300 men on the crew and, when I hired on, three women—Lael, Sherry and Marie.

Those women were trail blazers because back then many men were not happy to have women on the workforce. The mines in this area had been worked since the late 1800’s and many had been in operation, in some form, for around 100 years. Generations of the same families worked the same mine and old traditions and superstitions held strong.  One of those superstitions/traditions barred women from going underground, because back in the day, women only went underground after a disaster—to look for loved ones. Therefore women=disaster. (Some guys still hold this belief and it has nothing to do with mining.)

My job was simple. I drove a train, like the one in the photo only bigger, hauled ore out of chutes and dumped it in a bigger chute, where it would be hoisted up out of the mine in a muck skip. It was a rather mindless job, because the train was on tracks and I pretty much drove back and forth, back and forth. Every now and then the train would jump the tracks and my partner, Billy, (who was the same size as me) and I would jack that multi-ton behemoth back onto the track. And then it would jump the track again. Mines don’t have tracks anymore and I can tell you why—you waste a lot of money and man hours keeping the train on the track.

But back to the reading. I worked with many men who were taught from childhood to never curse in front of a woman. The younger guys didn’t have a problem, but I put a severe damper on conversations involving the older guys. Therefore, since I just wasn’t that into 4x4s with lift kits, fishing with dynamite or the local hot women, I would find a quiet rocky corner and break out a Harlequin Presents from my bucket, i.e. lunch box. (At that time there was only Harlequin Romance and Harlequin Presents—does that date me, or what?) I read many, many books underground. The pages got a little grimy and wet, but oh well. I would be deep into the adventures of Alexandra and Rafael while the rest of the crew was talking man talk. But I was listening with half an ear. And being entertained. I think that’s why I do okay with guy speak. I’ve heard a lot of it.

I am giving away a $15 Starbucks card today and one SuperRomance Kindle download of your choice--any author. Coffee and a Super--does it get any better than that? Just tell me about an interesting, funny fantastic or horrendous job you’ve held.

Sunday, April 17, 2011

Tax Relief - Superromance Stimulus Package Winner


It's income tax time again, Americans: time to gather up those receipts, get out those tax forms, sharpen up that pencil, and stab yourself in the aorta.

n   Dave Barry


The only difference between a taxman and a taxidermist is that the taxidermist leaves the skin.
n   Mark Twain


Be wary of strong drink. It can make you shoot at tax collectors... and miss.
n   Robert A. Heinlein


I'm spending a year dead for tax reasons.
n   Douglas Adams


I like to pay taxes. It is purchasing civilization.
n   Oliver Wendell Holmes


Rich bachelors should be heavily taxed. It is not fair that some men should be happier than others.
n   Oscar Wilde


In general, the art of government consists in taking as much money as possible from one party of the citizens to give to the other.
n   Voltaire


If you are truly serious about preparing your child for the future, don't teach him to subtract - teach him to deduct.
n   Fran Lebowitz

The best measure of a man's honesty isn't his income tax return. It's the zero adjust on his bathroom scale.
n   Arthur C. Clarke


Income tax returns are the most imaginative fiction being written today.
n   Herman Wouk




SuperRomance Stimulus Package Winner!


Rita Merlow YOU have won!

A $50 Visa Gift Card

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Saturday, April 16, 2011

Weekend April 16 - 17





This week's daily drawing winners...




Monday, April 11 , 2011
Smshuke
A Toss On bracelet courtesy of Mary Brady.

Tuesday, April 12, 2011
Yzhabella’s bookshelf
A copy of Deserving Luke by Tracy Wolff and Hidden Embers, written as Tessa Adams.

Wednesday, April 13, 2011
Cathy M, Ginny M Chirstensen
Two books of winner’s choice, one from RT Award winners, and one from Debra Salonen’s backlist.

Thursday, April 14, 2011
Anne Macfarlane
A copy of This Cowboy’s Son by Mary Sullivan

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And don't miss next week's bloggers...


Monday, April 18, 2011

Jeannie Watt




Tuesday, April 19 , 2011

Helen Brenna



Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Lenora Worth


Thursday, April 21, 2011

TBA


Friday, April 15, 2011

Writing Tip of the Week

"When you're writing or plotting, put yourself in your hero 
or heroine's shoes and ask "what would I do/how would I feel 
if this happened to me?" Most of the time, you don't need big plot twists and crazy happenings to move your story along - just allow your characters to respond as real human beings 
and you'll come up with plenty of drama."

~ Sarah Mayberry

The winner of this week's 5-page Super Critique is Marybelle.
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