Thursday, January 26, 2012

Writing Tip of the Week


DON’T be afraid of your own voice and style. 

DON’T attempt to write in a popular author’s style rather than your own. It won’t ring true and the writing will be shallow, leaving the reader to feel a lack of connection with you.

DO put pieces of yourself—your soul, your character and personality—into your novels, so readers can relate to YOU when they read your stories.

Love, honor and respect your own voice, and appreciate that you have one!

~Mary Sullivan



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NetFlix Thinks I'm Nuts


by Rogenna Brewer

What do Toddlers & Tiaras, African American Lives, The Catherine Tate Show, High School Musical, National Geographic Beyond the Movie: Alexander the Great, Basketball Wives, River Monsters, iCarly, Nature Boy Rick Flair And Aeon Flux all have in common? Me, apparently.

Netflix seems to think I'd like these shows.  I beg to differ.

I was thumbing through these recommendations the other night when it stuck me there wasn't a thing in the queue I wanted to watch.  What is it my viewing habits are trying to say about me?  That my tastes are eclectic?  Or am I simply confused?

At least Jeffrey Zaslow knows his TiVo thinks he's gay.  His 2002 Wall Street Journal article was spoofed on episodes of King of Queens (CBS) and The Mind of a Married Man (HBO).

Okay, I admit to watching several National Geographic military specials for research and there was that month long marathon with a different season of The Tudors each weekend.  So maybe I can see where Alexander the Great comes in.  But I've also held Lost and Vampire Diaries marathons.  How does that translate to River Monsters and Aeon Flux?

And I swear to you I don't watch reality TV.

Except for the music and talent shows.  Okay, Sister Wives.  Do you think that explains Toddlers & Tiaras, African America Lives, Basketball Wives, Nature Boy Ric Flair and High School Musical?

Who's Catherine Tate and why would I like her?  For that matter what would iRogenna get out of watching  iCarly?

These personalization technologies think they have us all figured out with browsing algorithms.  Then how do you explain my iTunes crush on Katy Perry?

Today I'm giving away a $10 gift card to one lucky commenter for the site that has me all figured out Amazon.com.  Have you ever received a wacky technology based recommendation?

Tuesday, January 24, 2012

Volunteers Building Communities

Mary Sullivan

On Sunday, I visited a small bicycle repair shop on a busy thoroughfare in my very busy city to visit a young friend who was working for the afternoon. I'd heard a lot about this store and wanted to see how it operated.

My young friend was volunteering for the day, which she does for five or six hours one Sunday out of every month. Given that she is working on her Masters in Environmental Studies and has two paying jobs to support herself, I'm impressed that she still manages to find time to donate. Sundays are Women and Transgender days. Men are allowed at any other times that the store is open, but not on Sunday afternoons. Why? Because this bicycle shop doesn't repair bikes for you; rather they teach you how to repair your own bikes. The logic behind Women and Trans days is that women may be intimidated doing mechanical jobs in front of men, unfortunate but quite possibly true. The little shop was packed with women.

Women had bikes set up at stations, while my young friend walked from station to station directing what needed to be done to fix various problems. The cost to the women? Any parts used needed to be paid for, plus whatever small donation that could be made to keep the shop running. The prices for parts were extremely reasonable because they are all donated.

A couple of women sat at a worktable with wheels in clamps in front of them learning how to fix them.

I was impressed by the depth of knowledge my friend has. I had no idea bikes were so complex.

In the small kitchen behind the repair area, another couple of volunteers cooked lunch--chickpea curry, because all they had were chickpeas and rice. I had brought a snack for my friend. The next time I visit, I'll bring staples for their kitchen ;-)

The basement was full of broken bikes, donations from people who would no longer be using them. Some of the bikes that were too far gone for repair were cannibalized for parts. Once a month, volunteers meet at the shop to repair bikes that still have a lot of life in them. They repair these bikes then put them up for sale at reasonable prices. Usually, the volunteers end up pulling an all-nighter to get as many bikes repaired as possible. Someone cooks dinner for all of them on a shoestring budget.

I am SO impressed that so many of these young people give so freely of their time to help others. They are passionate about putting more bicycles on the road so there are fewer cars out there. None of the people who work there while the shop is open are paid for their time. I salute their passion and their willingness to give.

I saw a strong sense of community, of giving and sharing knowledge, in a place where women were comfortable learning about the mechanics of keeping their own bicycles repaired. I left feeling good that this tiny segment of the next generation is toiling to make our world a better place.

Volunteering has long been a wonderful way to take a little of our time, energy, and expertise and share it with others.

Do you know of any communities in which volunteers give of themselves so generously? Are you involved in volunteer work? What does it do for you? Does it leave you with a sense of accomplishment or satisfaction? I would love to hear about your experiences.

Monday, January 23, 2012

Small Spaces

Small Spaces

I’ve been writing up a storm lately and loving every second of it! And that burst of creativity made me wonder why the sudden rush of new ideas. Hard to ignore that I’d been living in a trailer for several months while our new home was built, and we’d finally - finally! - moved into our house.

At first the trailer seemed like a great idea. We had a deck and a view that was, still is, the envy of everyone on the bay. Breakfast on the deck. Oh, yeah. Until summer rolled over into fall. Still with the nice weather, just not quite as nice. And no more breakfasts on the deck. Or dinners, or cocktail hours. Tasks that had been so simple during the summer grew into arduous chores as the cold weather moved in.

After seven months we moved several yards up the hill from cramped quarters to what felt like heaven—our new house. The first thing I did was set up a large table as a desk and spread out. And a strange thing happened. As I spread out physically, I expanded mentally. I could think again. Story ideas blossomed. Characters started behaving themselves, and Snap! that new synopsis almost wrote itself. Almost.

I’ve never taken the time, or maybe it’s had the luxury, to analyse the ideal conditions for me to be able to write. The things I do know – a room with a closed door and a minimum of noise - I’ve learned through experience. Up until this fall, I didn’t know that feeling cramped could cripple my imagination. I wonder if small spaces affect other people the same way. If their creativity reflects the area around them. Maybe that’s why going for a walk helps shake up story problems or any kind of problem, really. I never purposely set out to solve anything, but I often find after a long walk answers fall into place. A good night’s sleep will also do that, and I suppose in a way sleep is another avenue to explore a different landscape.

Or maybe some people are the opposite and need to minimize their working area in order to concentrate or create. Walking, sleeping and giving myself enough space are some of the circumstances that help stretch my imagination. And that’s only the physical aspects. The mental and/or emotional state of mind is another layer of complexity I’ll leave for someone else to discuss.

I’m sure others have methods they favor, and I’m always open to learning new approaches. I’m curious. What detracts from your writing? What are your ideal conditions?

Kate Kelly

Sunday, January 22, 2012




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Monday January 16, 2012

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Thursday, January 26, 2012

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Friday, January 20, 2012

Writing Tip of the Week


Write or Die kills Writer's Block.

Write or Die is a new kind of writing productivity application that forces you to write by providing consequences for distraction and procrastination.As long as you keep typing, you're fine, but if you become distracted, punishment will ensue. Everything is configurable, name your word goal, time goal and preferred punishment, then start writing! Once you're done, export your writing to Dropbox, Email, Clipboard or Text file.
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"Write or Die is a web application that encourages writing by punishing the tendency to avoid writing. Start typing in the box. As long as you keep typing, you’re fine, but once you stop typing, you have a grace period of a certain number of seconds and then there are consequences.

Many people find themselves unable to write consistently. I believe that this is because their reason to write is intangible. For instance, I want to write and finish a book because I want to be published and make a living as a writer. That goal is a long way away so I often find it difficult to sit down to the task of writing.

Conversely, I’m in a creative writing class for which I manage to consistently write and finish projects (albeit at the last minute). I therefore draw the conclusion:

A tangible consequence is more effective than an intangible reward.

If I don’t write stories for class, I will receive scorn from my teacher and a bad grade in the class. If I don’t write my own stories I am only disappointing myself. I experience perpetual disappointment in myself so I’m kindof used to it. Add to that the fact that I simply have neither the self-discipline to write consistently on my own nor the capacity for self-deception that would enable me to create artificial deadlines. That is how Write or Die was born.

The idea is to instill in the would-be writer with a fear of not writing. We do this by employing principles taught in Introduction to Psychology. Anyone remember Operant Conditioning and Negative Reinforcement?

Negative Reinforcement “strengthens a behavior because a negative condition is stopped or avoided as a consequence of the behavior.”

Consequences:

Gentle Mode: A certain amount of time after you stop writing, a box will pop up, gently reminding you to continue writing.
Normal Mode: If you persistently avoid writing, you will be played a most unpleasant sound. The sound will stop if and only if you continue to write.
Kamikaze Mode: Keep Writing or Your Work Will Unwrite Itself
These consequences will persist until your preset conditions have been met (that is, your time is up or you’ve written you wordcount goal or both)

This text box is not a word processor, it is not for editing, the way to save is to select all of the text, copy and paste into your own text editor. The idea is to separate the writing process and the editing process as much as possible.

This is aimed at anyone who wants to get writing done. It requires only that you recognize your own tendency towards self-sabotage and be willing to do something about it. If you’re sick of saccharine writing advice that no one could honestly follow and you want a real method to getting work done."

Works great for real deadlines too!
Excellent for getting your 1667 words a day for NaNoWriMo
Good for writing on lunch breaks, just enter 30 minutes in the time limit box
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Thursday, January 19, 2012

Catching Thoughts

It's occurred to me that I spend a lot of my time trying to crawl into my characters heads. Their minds are a mystery to me and it's my job to figure them out so that I can put them on the page for my readers enjoyment and entertainment. Like any skill or repetitive action it's best to employ this aspect of writing great romance on a regular basis. For example, look at my dog Misha in the photo. What do you guess he's thinking about? I can tell you that quite often on this very walk we run into a herd of deer--10-12, minimum. Misha is Russian-born and loves the cold, so the below-freezing temps are a joy to him.
Some characters are easier to dissect than others. If I've had the same profession or lived through the same or similar situation, I can draw on my own experience to add to my hero or heroine's authenticity. Come to think of it, I've almost always had a similar experience--emotionally. I may not have faced all the conflicts that my characters have but I've certainly at least known someone who has. And it's my observation that emotions are universal--we all have them, we all share them. Hence why I love writing romance and relationship books. I get to delve deeply into my heroine's heart--and her hero's. I get to see what connects all of us at the most basic level.
The romantic in me believes that Misha intuitively connects to what's important. Spending time with my dog helps me stay grounded and keep my stories and characters on track, too.